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Literally I have no idea how long it's been since i posted something on here.
My friend who is sitting next to me while I type this tells me I haven't posted a journal since November... Sorry guys :P

Anywho, a good friend/boyfriend of mine (yes, I said boyfriend :love: ) and I started talking about a dream i had a while ago, and we started spawning ideas like crazy.

We took those ideas and started co-writing a story with them, and I'd really appreciate if you guys would critique our work so far.

Before you start reading, I'll give you a bit of a back story:

My boyfriend was dead for an hour when he was born, and that plays a huge role in the story.
I am pretty damn good at writing about nightmares and other horrific events, so there's a few of those in there.
It's titled "Darklings" and it's loosely written off of real events and people.
We could have taken the time to develop whole new characters and their personalities, but we were really excited about this story and kind of skipped that part.
Our writing styles differ greatly (I usually convert his writing into a form similar to mine because his grammar and sense of  punctuation is terrible) and it makes writing the story interesting to say the least.
He's never submitted his writing anywhere, and it makes him nervous.

Anyway, any questions you have I'd love to answer for you,and if you enjoy the story I would greatly appreciate if you would share with your friends or watchers or followers or whatever you prefer to call them.

Again, it means a lot to me if you guys would comment with your thoughts on the story, especially if you want more:

Deviously yours,

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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
thanks :D
breaking-the-rules Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fav :)
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Thanks for the favs :D
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MandyTrimm Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the fave! I'm glad you liked it! :D
gehenna-angel Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the fav! =D
MinnaSD Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the :+fav:!
sailormoon118 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist
thanks for the fav
stevieboy11 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the favourite. :)
Aussie-Roo-Boy Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks heaps for the fav/add to the collection :D
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